We decided to tell our cross-country stories. We have done this in two ways. Firstly we wrote our story. We used our senses to help add some details to our writing. We thought about what we could see, what we could hear, what we could feel and how we felt in our heart.
We also told our story in ‘code’. With Carolyn we thought about how we can use paint and symbols to share our story. Again we thought about what we could see, what we could hear, what we could feel and how we felt in our heart.
- Plan my writing
- Add details to my writing
- Create a code to tell my story
- Speak clearly and with expression as I tell my story
How I am going
Plan my writing
Add details to my writing
Create a code to tell my story
Speak clearly and with expression as I tell my story
I really like: writing about cross country because I liked running the cross country and I liked sharing my story.
I think I need to practice: writing on the lines and having more than one ideas in my story.
Something that really helped me was: my plan helps me remember my ideas so I can write more than one idea.
You have told your story in 2 ways, you wrote your story and you painted it in code. With support you can plan your writing and I love the way you use your plan to add details to your writing. You next step is to play your writing by yourself and to always writie more than one idea.